RivalOfficial (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

ENORME!!! Good job!

nicolafan88 (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

"a premonition, a fuckin set incision of a lone man"internal rymhes so hard to do naturally but so crazy when accomplishedi think that putting a line like that near the end would be nutskinda give a lyrical punch line effect to the verse.

carey7219 (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

rappers split when i spit, covered in ashcrackers dip cus i lit fires up under dey assthey fearin the rage im throwinlunacaracy and lyrically what i use, i own themspiritually i am seeing an omena premonition, a fuckin set incision of a lone manburned into my brain that you will not be livin for long mancolumbus discovered new landsthink of me as this mankissin the sands of these words letters cant brand

carey7219 (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

yo most of that was sick.only a few lines didnt make sense but its still definitely respectable flow from what im readin

nicolafan88 (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

getting blazed off the beats necessitynecessary sounds like the heartbeatsdagger stagger when enemies start to meetwalk parallel crossroadswalk agony the featswear never to feel agony defeatrepeating rhyme ragemental range of the sagemusical macabre better than new agescar face like animal ripped cagecoca-nostra shadow kick from cagepowder and the shadows caught up in same pageparagraphs poisonous darts from the sagesonic boom tomb for those trapped in the maze

ShaolinnKidd21 (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

Yo I Be The Type you call maniac Ima genious you can even say ima brainiac Man i be spittin da illest shit, dat shit dat be makin u angry and ya teeth grit battle me yo dats a big mistake i'll crunch ya ass up like leaves get crunched up by a rake u dudes is fake my shit make u wanna shake u niggaz really think u can beeat me? ha ill take ya'll one by one indiviually dont fuck with me u fake wannabes whu u dudes really think u impressin cuzz obviously it aint me u gettin served why cnt u jus see

Asado1506 (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

pharao monch-simon says (instrumental)is the best

marcdivine87 (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

check outmarc divine - revolutionsick rhymes!

nicolafan88 (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

ayo shout outs to mr demoncuz we be on the mission ca-re-min to get that cream thenthinner through the winter but weathered the stormvortex cortex the hell being spawnedspinning out of control similar to the armsthe nuclear the nucleus ubiquitous doomed to be sick with this but don't make a lick of sensehoneys lick the licorice until i tell em that I'm sick of thisdiarrhea flow shit on anyonelook up at the sky and get burned by the sunfission from atomic apple Adams iron lung

SamFnLeonhard (December 31, 1969 at 5:59 pm)

They call me Mr. Demonorigin dates back to my fathers semen Where I was causing all types of hellCause I was the victim of a witches spellAnd when my father bust a nut in the dumpstaA radioactive beam shot from amongst yaAnd I grew into a 6 foot hellacious hellionI set up an Army for a horrific rebellionFormed my troops and started the committeeFound every new mother and stole the milk from they titty